Good beat but...
You can't really have a song without bass and lead can ya? Put a heavy bass in there with a nice lead melody and you'll be doin great.
Not bad for a first try. Adding more drums may make the song better though :)
haha ight thanks i'll be workin on my stuff i need lots of work O.o! lol
they is to much stuff left
bring in more drums and lead and kicks
nuu it's sound like to pooring :/
I've heard worse commercial stuff :)
oo lets make a commercial? o.O