This half is better
I like this half of the song better, you got rid of the little kid noise, but you still just repeated the same thing a bunch with not much change. Overall I enjoyed your song. Keep up the good work and thanks for the review you gave my song, even though it was a little vague.
The first part is like an "intro" sort of, until it breaks to the cool part. I think I made it too long probably. Thankx for the reviews, it helps to make better songs .