Pretty good, kind of simple
It is acceptable. If is a WIP try to improve more on the background.
the beats are just not supportive.
something with different beats but the same instrument cant get a good rap. experimenting isnt good when your only experimenting with a couple instruments. experiment using complicated synths having it sound mediocre or average and have it get a 5 instead of 3 out of ten. experimenting is just another way of saying judge this critically to help me find new experiments.
p.s. ALL my songs are experiments.
ight thanks for the tip much respect
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.