Shazaam
After 12 takes on the drums and 6 on the solo we finally made this song great but do i credit for the idea for the solo or the drum beat... no but i gladly hit the record button 18 times
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The finished product. I kinda sped it up and added some things and took away others. Overall I think it is at least decent. I finally got my drums up here so I could try to make the song a little better. Anyways hope you enjoy and have a great day :D
Wolfonite responds:
HAHA! Yeah without you I wouldn't of gotten it finished. Thanks for that lol. XD
Hmm...
The drums are really good, i like them.
The song is pretty good too but..
(And now some constructive criticism from ur big fan)
The beginning. I hoped for a one, that will be slowly progressing, building up, but you started the song from nowhere, instantly. It's not really that bad, but I just think that the one which start with only a guitar(maybe with two of them, or even something else) and then other instruments join, create better atmosphere.
I'll try to explain to you, how I would like it to be.(Of course, it's only my subjective opinion, and opinion only. Not that i demand you to do anything or something like that :D )
(oh, and by the way... My english sucks, so if you have any problems with understanding what I'm going to write now, PM me please - I'll try to explain it again :) ... And i'm not a musician, so i dont know any of those terms you are supposed to use while talking about a music :D)
First, for about 15-17s the slower melody played at the beginning with the guitar in the WIP version(exacly the same one like in the WIP ver, but without the faster melody played by another guitar).
After this, the second guitar join, playing the same melody as the faster one in WIP ver. (in WIP ver. it started from the beginning along with the slower one)
After another 17s we will be at the same point where is the WIP ver. after 17s :)
And then ur great drums join :)
And blah blah blah...
In the middle of the song there should be one solo on electric guitar(you are just awesome in that, so it would sound great)
But... When the solo starts, all of the other instruments should stop playing for a first part of the solo, and after this the solo continues for a while the rest of instruments join. That, in your rendition would be so FCUKIN AWESOME.
Sorry i'm writing so chaotically, but i'm in a hurry :(
So... There should be another electric guitar solo before the ending, but this time with the accompaniment of all instruments.
The ending itself should be similar to the beginning, first two, then only one guitar.
Okay, that's it. Sorry for the spam :)
Even tough i whine so much, the song itself is pretty good, so once again, nice job :)
Wolfonite responds:
I get what your saying,but here is why it changed. About 4 weeks ago a friend of mine came up to me and said "Hey I got some lyrics, but I can't put music to them, could you help me out?" Then a week or so later this started playing in my head thus the WIP version, he came back to me a few days after I gave him that version. He asked me to speed it up and instead of a solo just throw in some background guitar (thus the guitar that starts at :15 secs and carries through) I tried to sneak one in without making it look like a solo at 2:26 if you listen hard its very faint but its there. :D But yes I would of loved to kept it the way it was and throw a more noticeable solo in the mix, but this seemed to work better for him. But thank your for the constructive criticism. Now that this is done I can go back to workin' on my stuff, maybe something more to your liking lol. Anyways thanks for the comment :D
YES!
Did not disappoint! MAN! That was awesome! I have to listen to it again! Love them drums it kinda makes the song in a way. Great job!
Wolfonite responds:
Thank you kindly. It was a headache getting them recorded, but this room has amazing acoustics. Glad you enjoyed it thanks for the comment!
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