Could've Done With Some Techno
The start was actually really good, but after a while it got a lot worse. After the first lot of "maybe we'll shine forever"s, it could have gone into a Cascada-like techno bit. As much as I hate techno, I think that would sound pretty good. The timing between the music and vocals was off too, and I have a feeling the vocals had a different beat to the music. I also think it would have been good with a few more verses, like the first verse. If it was more like that, I might actually listen to it.
no man. what have you done? you know the massive flaming ur gonna get 4 that?
shut up, i made this a long time ago! and i realize it sucks, and i find it ironic, thatMY WORST FUCKING SONG GETS MORE REVIEWS THAN MY NEWER BETTER STUFF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yes everyone i realize that this song blows! now hush about it and listen and review my newer stuff please ^^ it is a lot better than this.
this started out ok but it went downhill from there. the timing of the music was horrible and the lyrics definitely did not fit the music. good luck on your other ones but this one was absolutely horrible.
Yes, i realize this sucks. thanks for pointing that out for me like everyone else did lol. well its ok though, cause this is OLD. listen to more of my more recent stuff eh? this was around when i first started making music. Thanks for the review anyway though.
Okay here's the thing....you need to stop the voices when the music starts okay...coz if was kool until that drum came in
im not messing with this again.
please stay far away from music.you hurt it.
nah it's ok :)