I dance alon too.
The piano you used was iffy at times. The notes and the variation but it sounds a bit artificial. but you save your self well at :54 with thiss nice poppy synth. Nut I don't know man I would have used a different piano. I could also say its a bit busy in terms of percussion, and seems to lose flow.
But I still enjoyed in terms of melody structure. So yes good work!
I was trying to somewhat mimic The Postal Service with those drums, but i didn't do too good of a job. I agree the piano could be better, it's pretty much FL Studio's DirectWave with mixer stuff.
Thanks for the review!