AND GOOD MORNING TO YOU TOO GOOD SIR!
Composition is fairly good, good use maybe one or two small parts with more speed for some flavour, but otherwise is good.
The song overall is just a bit TOO LOUD. Try lowering the master volume, and then the bass too, just a little bit.
This piece is actually pretty catchy, but the first synth in the beginning is lame. SPICE DAT UP SON! : D
The second synth is better, but could use more feel. Make more grungy maybe...
Third synth is WONKY. Try using a different module there, something completely different.
Fourth; meh, that one's fine.
Fifth is TOO LOUD. D: Tweak it a bit, make each synth sound distinct from the others.
IS NOT SO BAD.
POTENTIAL IS IN THE AIR.
GOOD LUCK SIR, THE PORTAL CAN BE BRUTAL.
Wow, someone actually providing constructive criticism! I am shocked.
Yeah, most people who've heard it agree that the bass drum is too loud.
Thanks for the review!