not too bad =).
The piano i think is what is most of a turn off for me. I don't think you have enough verb, or even a slight delay would give it a bit more of a better sound in my opinion. Though the song itself as a idea works well. I just think there are some parts that you can work on to make it shine. Like, change up the beat a bit more. Perhaps even use some different synths here and there other then the ones your using. All in all its not a bad song =). So keep it up!