Nice try, i saw your into trance/uplifting :)
You did a great job placing leads from a soft starting, to a 'feels like heaven' ending within the rest :)
I like that!
dont know if you already knew this but im missing compressing on the kick with some EQing?
Or youre abouit to use another kick??
Anyways, if you want any help on that you can simply ask me :)
4/5 - 8/10
Keep it up!
being a work in progress i cant review it like its done so obviouse flaws like the ending are irrelavent but the song has a nice sound, like you described it feels verying uplifiting and trance. i really liked pause and build up in the middle with the pads it sounded great to me. a few little things that bothered me... the simplicity of the bass line, its not bad because it deffinatly works just its very repetetive and simple. i wasnt to fond of the crash cymbal ( ha :P ) idk somthing just didnt sound right with me like it was too deep but thats just a opinion. and at around 12 and 26 seconds the kick fills seemed off to me and didnt flow right at all so you might want to move those around a little ( it sounds right later on like at 44 seconds but those seem off) but i mean like you said work in progress and most my cons where purely opinions ha so, 8/10 4/5
great start, will be great when finished.
this is exactly what i need, thanks for the review, i'll look at the flaws that u have mentioned.
thanks again! :D