It seemed like you had a few melodies going. You should make sure everything compliments eachother instead of trying to lead. At 1:15 i liked what you started to do though. Good job.
Like your Style
Diggin the beat dude keep it up like your work :D
Love the tune, i love the way it builds up and maintains the same rhythm a well constructed piece of dubstep.
I just recantl started making Dubstep too and I'v e got to say this is better than mine. Your technique was great but some of the instruments seemed out of place and the song sounded a bit mushed together.
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Keep working at it and you'll master this genre.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.