The harmony instruments were meh.
Melody was cool and all.
Actually very good
You have a nice idea going,
smooth out the sounds and it'll be awesome in my opinion
It was alright
But it didn't build up to a point. It was really stale and kept me waiting for a non-arriving climax.
This is pretty good! the instruments could be changed up a little to be more smooth, right now they don't really fit the over all mood of the song, that's the only reason it isn't a 10/10, though I still think 5/5 is a good way to go ^_^
One more suggestion would be the addition of a Pad to fill in the sounds, maybe a bass line as well.
this is pretty good start actually! Keep up the good work!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.