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|White Fire|

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Umm Probably my first ever submission worth listening to. Im pretty excited about it please leave comments! constructive criticism if possible :)

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synth comes in pretty loudly

the synths that come in at the beginning were a little loud, and drowned out the intro rhythm section (which was great by the way ;))

One pet peeve about the bass line: on the fourth...hmm...note pair? it just changed to the next note pair, without a transition note (i suggest going up a half step) like the rest of the transitions in the note pairs. just a small suggestion, but it could go a long way

It was really easy to recognize these general synths...i'm pretty sure one of them was solo star, no? put effects on those suckers dude! it would sound a lot less like it came from garage band, which would be a good thing!

overall, some easy listening, but it has a lot of potential to be built upon and touched up. 7/10 4/5

MelonChucker responds:

yeah this song was really my first garage band song i was just starting to get the hang of it u can probably see the difference from white fire to neon to kilogram they progress. I have fl studio but i havent been able to really polish any songs because im just not that good with it yet

Fresh as Hell

Rly sweet voices but a better underlying beat would hav been nice. U got me listening to all ur stuff now.

MelonChucker responds:

Thanx again spread the word I fell like slot of my stuff just drops off the front page and no one eve sees them

Sweet love it at 1:24

This song is you best yet and I love the overlapping voices. Do Work!

MelonChucker responds:

Do u by any chance have an xbox live gamertag that is also fruit unit?

nice

I agree with josoi it is pretty good but you still need some work on it. work on your volume levels

MelonChucker responds:

yeah i know i didnt know u had a new gorunds account eather lol

this is pretty good

not the best i've ever heard, but great start. keep going i'm sure you'll get tons better.

MelonChucker responds:

I didnt know u had a new grounds acount

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Faves:
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Downloads
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Votes
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Score
4.17 / 5.00

Uploaded
Nov 3, 2009
11:39 AM EST
Genre
Techno
File Info
Song
4.1 MB
3 min 1 sec

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.