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Nov 3, 2009 | 11:39 AM EST
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4.1 MB
3 min 1 sec
3.93 / 5.00

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Rated 3.93 / 5 stars
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Author Comments

Umm Probably my first ever submission worth listening to. Im pretty excited about it please leave comments! constructive criticism if possible :)



Rated 5 / 5 stars

pretty good!

I've been listening to this on loop for a whiel and didn't even realize how long I had been listening to it- thus you can bet your bottom dollar that it's pretty good music! I liek it- its calming stealth-like music - reminds me of battletoads a lot! I can picture cheesy kick and punch noises throughout :P

Nothing really to add - it's pretty good as is!

Keep up the good work!



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

synth comes in pretty loudly

the synths that come in at the beginning were a little loud, and drowned out the intro rhythm section (which was great by the way ;))

One pet peeve about the bass line: on the fourth...hmm...note pair? it just changed to the next note pair, without a transition note (i suggest going up a half step) like the rest of the transitions in the note pairs. just a small suggestion, but it could go a long way

It was really easy to recognize these general synths...i'm pretty sure one of them was solo star, no? put effects on those suckers dude! it would sound a lot less like it came from garage band, which would be a good thing!

overall, some easy listening, but it has a lot of potential to be built upon and touched up. 7/10 4/5

MelonChucker responds:

yeah this song was really my first garage band song i was just starting to get the hang of it u can probably see the difference from white fire to neon to kilogram they progress. I have fl studio but i havent been able to really polish any songs because im just not that good with it yet


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Fresh as Hell

Rly sweet voices but a better underlying beat would hav been nice. U got me listening to all ur stuff now.

MelonChucker responds:

Thanx again spread the word I fell like slot of my stuff just drops off the front page and no one eve sees them


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Sweet love it at 1:24

This song is you best yet and I love the overlapping voices. Do Work!

MelonChucker responds:

Do u by any chance have an xbox live gamertag that is also fruit unit?


Rated 4 / 5 stars


I agree with josoi it is pretty good but you still need some work on it. work on your volume levels

MelonChucker responds:

yeah i know i didnt know u had a new gorunds account eather lol