In the beginning it had sort of an Eminem feel to it, and went to a Timbaland feel later on. Good job
I just cant get enough of the funk from this. Bongo=love, horns= love, bass guitar line=boner. It feels like I've been raped. If wish I could tell what needs work, but Im liking what I hear. all I can say, is add more of it, whatever it is.
I could try to make a rap to this
Go for it dude, just PM me or whatever.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.