This fuckin' ferocious beat was made by EternalXIII and can be found here: http://www.newgrounds.com /audio/listen/279334
Lemme know what you all think on this one, particularly on the delivery, tryin' to focus on that lately.
lyrics:
I guess the time is right,
gotta step from the dark into the light, so I can see the scope of humanities plight,
and from here, it's really not looking right
how many many mothers and babies get killed every night?
How many fathers fall in war they didn't want to fight.
We concerned with international might,
but we didnt comprehend localized fright.
people killin in the name of Christ,
Others might do the same, cept they killing for the same man with a different name.
I coulda sworn that we voted for change, but one man cant turn the world starin through a window pane.
Matter of fact we gotta shoulder the blame, we want to send it off on its way,
bought a ticket put it on the last train.
And as we wave goodbye, it's like compassion got consumed in a fire.
From the time we start to grow
We plantin seeds we can never sow
and as we bask in irradiated glow
Maybe its a good time to end the show
From the richest man to the average joe
We've closed our minds to a treasure trove
we know the cons so listen to the pros
Maybe its a good time to end the show
All strugglin to get in the know
yet everything we know we keep it on the low
so many hearts froze to the bone
maybe its a good time to let the curtain close
Stone age mentality still reigning our reality and we dominate the weak so tragically,
we betrothed to the logical fallacies. And so casually,
we toss our minds aside,
and we sheathed in the armor made from our own pride,
and as memories collide, we descry
the future through our mind'e eye.
But we cant recall the essence of our own drive, blowin in the wind like we from the chi.
And this the fury deep inside my chest
gonna send me into cardiac arrest,
and even though I detest,
Im still fallin prey to the guiles just like all the rest
From the time we start to grow
We plantin seeds we can never sow
and as we bask in irradiated glow
Maybe its a good time to end the show
From the richest man to the average joe
We've closed our minds to a treasure trove
we know the cons so listen to the pros
Maybe its a good time to end the show
All strugglin to get in the know
yet everything we know we keep it on the low
so many hearts froze to the bone
maybe its a good time to let the curtain close
nice man
ya if you wanna collab we ready homie, u got a verse you need me on let me know, if we got open verse we'll let you know.
song: im just tryin to be constructive ya digg?
delivery was good you brought the delivery, rhymes was dope, the thing you gotta work on is your scales. your scales are off.and u can go somewhere wit your music if you master your scales. Thats what i been workin on n' i can see my self gettin there.
dope keep it up
Nice!
This is impressive! Your flow is above avarage and the lyrics aint bad at all.
Feels like the track need some more mastering though, the beat is a little too lousy and its hard to focus on the rapping. But fuck that, this is good. Damn good.
This is just epic!
I would be honored if you were to spit over one of my tracks
I'll check your stuff out man, got a lot of shit going on right now though, might be a minute.
musicle genis u are
fkin awsome
hah, genius I dont know about all that, but Im glad you like it
4.31 / 5.00 (+ 0.37)
we shud do another collab yo
sure man get at me
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
BAF 
