Nice Solo Performance
Since I haven't heard the first one, I can't really state the differences of the backround guitar. I guess this song did have good melody to it, and some good solo parts. For some reason some parts sounded like they were just a little screwed up, but overall a killer solo.
not too bad
two suggestions from a fellow guitarist that could make this sound infinitely better.
1.) muting, palm mute the strings you aren't playing during a lead. this will stop them from ringing out and they won't hum and buzz. this will give you a much cleaner sounding lead.
2.) bending, when you bend a string, don't just bend it, lisetn closely to the note, bend it up to the correct not, one in the same key. for a great example of this kind of bending, listen to the solo from "Hotel California" by the eagles. the first 30 seconds or so use a lot of bending, if you learn that much it will help solos like tis one sound much better.
good job nonetheless though, especialy considering it was improvised. just try out the muting and listen to your bends and it'll help alot.
A bit fuzzy but good.Could have been a bit smoother but you probably wrote it today so it doesn't really matter.Great job.
It was all completely improvised as I was recording it. Basically I think I need to work on my sweeps and then I'll be pretty good. Thanks Dood!!
And I didn't care much for the quality because it's just a demo. If I actually do guitar for our online band, I'll work on the quality.