lol, not bad...
well, its a good rap, at least, although the swear words all over the place dont exactly help. Frankly u could name it Swear seeign as thats basically all it is ;)
The background music is srsly good though, theres a decent melody, maybe u could submit this without words and work a bit mreo on the background. Im sure it'd do well.
Overall, its a decent piece, a good rap but nice work really goes to the instrumetns in the background.
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