ok now, this was an interesting beat, i liked it for the variaty and differant feel, this was more of two differant parts with the "FIRST" part being really messy and not really going anywhere but it did have the variaty of stuff so i liked the variaty of it just wish it was more like the second part, and as for the "SECOND" part that was pretty amazing it was more streamlined and had more of a good feel of a song and such, i think this could all be better if the whole track was just all of the second part, so theres an idea for you to really get this on another level, anyways good luck with anything new.
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The second part towards the end was my fave so if you removed the messy first part and filled it with the ending style it will be perfect.
Odd sounds i hear o.o
Well, you dont fill your entire background with pointless music... and yet the rhythm sounds interesting. Simple, yet i like.
I really like this, but i don't think that the faster beat near the end fits in.
Thanks. I made it to fit my Just Rewards movie. It fits there but I agree it sounds a bit weird on its own.