Pretty decent, but
I like this song, but the background vocals are not sounding good, even excluding the vocal quality. What I do like actually, is the vocoder with the bad quality vocals. You should redo the background vocals that go behind "lay me down" with higher quality, and turn them down. Then, keep the bad quality vocals with the vocoder, and then when a full band comes in behind it, make the quality good again, with no autotune. Just a suggestion.
heeheehee. That's not a vocoder. That's just the way my voice sounds when it's recorded over a phone and autotuned. I can't sing well, so I use cheap autotune, play my talkbox, use a vocoder, or make my bandmate sing! This time, it was autotune, which makes me feel ashamed. And I must agree that the background vox aren't too hot. In terms of keeping the low quality cellphone vox for a bit and then adding a full band, I must disagree with the two suggestions. I clog arteries baby!!!
Oh noes! Snake eyes!
Wow, this may be simplistic, but it's got rhythm. I like it, I just wish it wasn't so short! :P
Well my friend, the shortness shall be fixed in just a few days! The review is much appreciated.