That bass mod rocks! it makes the song! The bass comes in a bit odd... but you forget after the drums start, lol.
Great work. solid 10/10
great bass modulation!
liked what you did here
Wow, pathetic, no reviews yet? (Until now)
Okay, your theme is pretty nice, I'll most definitely say. The drumwork is also pretty good, except it could use just a bit more mastering in my opinion; the kick and the snare don't stick out as much as they need to. Try layering your kick with a deeper, more omnipresent one; this will make it sound like ten times beefier, and make the important beats stick out more. the snare is a nice sound, perhaps could be just louder to stand out over the hihats. also, the theme, as nice as it is, needs more action; if you just repeat it over and over again, the listener eventually looses interest...Wow, okay, just went back and read what you wrote, sorry for stating the obvious like a dumbass. =P um, try flirting with your idea a little bit, using melodic expansion. it's tough, i know from my own personal experience, but totally worth it in the end, trust me! and one more thing: Your piano in the beginning feels too echoey. Try making the piano more delicate. It will catch the ear more, cuz ppl will be like "hmm, this is dnb? sounds like classical." that is, until, your drumwork comes in, and then from there on out, you got yourself a beautiful dnb tune! good work so far man. you got an excellent start, and I hope I gave you some stuff to think about. I always think it's uber lame when you want feedback and people 0-vote your shit before it can even get reviewed. That's just pathetic. In order to insure that someone else will give you feedback, I'll 5 ya. Lemme know when you finish this too man; I'm lookin forward to it!
Thank you for the time you took to write this.I hardly get any nice reviews like this.
As for the things you mentioned i totally agree with you, the piano does get stuck in the listener's head so i'll try to build it up with some automation to the point where it starts now.The drumloop is all custom made and i spend not more than 10 minutes on it so i guess it needs alot of tweaking.As for the theme, this song is still a WIP so there will be (hopefully) alot more going on.
Cheers and thanks for the nice review.I will let you know if i finish this piece.