love when people put real emotion in there music i cant feel it cuz its real.
Well, I disrespectfully agree with mauifuckboy. This is a cool idea for a track. Yes, your mixing is off in a few spots, but it isn't horrible. Your singing voice in the intro is k, but nothing special. Solid flow, decent delivery. I'm definitely feeling the lyrics though. So good work.
I respectfuly disagree with the comment before with some of his comments. I very much enjoy this. Im loving the chorus, especialy the melody. The begining vocal volumes are a bit overpowering but its a very touching song. However, not saying this was intentional but it seems like some of the lines were very similar to a couple compilations of eminem lyrics. Just saying, not occusing. But this is fantasticaly done and very emotional, great job.
Can't say I'm a big fan of this one. The thing that makes hip hop great is the instrumentals. The instrumentals/drum beat here seemed pretty mediocre and in addition, the vocals were completely overpowering the instrumentals. Also having 3 vocals going on at one time is not usually a good thing.