The main riff sounds nice, but it gets repitive pretty fast (maybe because you only played about two chords, or something like that).
The solo sounds nice, too. But it's too uncoordinated and it doesn't really fit with the simple riff.
Well i see u got an 8-track thats coo but u need to make it more structured... u r just staying in the same position the whole time... im guessing somewhere near 8-15 the whole time... go lower then higher... and ur backing track kinda sux no offense... check out my music at my profile :) im actually in a pretty well known band... :)
Not good, not bad
You have a good technique, you've obviously mastered hammerons/offs, and scales, tapping etc...but you seriously need to lay off the tremelo bar dude :D. Also, a better structured solo would be better, i mean, that was all over the place dude. And it didn't fit in too well with the two chord riff you were playing underneath it. Theres only afew bands i know that can get away with that...and they are cannibal corpse and deicide :).
when i recorded this song i didn't use a guitar with a whammy bar
Make an album and I shall buy it!
You're a great metal guitarist!
Hey man, I thought that was a very tight improvised solo. You make me jealous.
There was one big problem with the recording, and that is that it was too quiet. I had to turn my speakers halfway to the maximum to hear it at a soft, but audible level. This will prevent it from being useful in a flash movie, but it still accurately reflects your talent as a guitarist.