The name fit the sound beautifully. Well done! Very calming, very relaxing, nice mixture of sounds, and outstanding overall presentation.
For a first time, you did amazing in this track.
If you want to REALLY impress me, take it further! If this was an intro to a composition where all the instruments don't sound compressed, and you brought everything to life, I would praise you.
Thank you very much. I was in fact trying to think of a direction for this song to go in. I didn't necessarily want to write a new melody or a terribly indepth development, so I think working on opening it up and maybe adding some different colors is a great idea for a goal.