Kinda repetitive. (u might have ment to do that) Just puttin it out there.
Maby sum more drums? less futuristic sounds? Change the melody up a bit, or completely drop it at points. Keep workin it fam. u seem to have the fundamentals down. Practice makes somewhat perfect. (No-bodys perfect)
Stay up. Keep it fire. PEace!
good lookin out god, thas exactly the kinda constructive criticism i wanna hear. you're right, i do gotta work on its repetition and such. thanks for the insight meng