Hi guys, I know it's been over a year and a half since my 1st song, I'm sorry. But here's my 2nd :) Brace yourself, because it's quite different than my first song. It's an acoustic recorded song which I produced in fruityloops, used phaser filter in combination with a flangus filter on my master channel. I wrote the song in 20 minutes and recorded it in 10, since my falsetto sounds really stupid i decided to put a flangus effect on my vocals. That sounded cool so i mixed a bit more and this is the result.
Very nearly enough...
A good basic concept. Needs a little fine tuning, but I like it. I think that perhaps an instrumental interlude thrown in the mix would really catch the ear. The effects on your voice are a nice touch...maybe overdone just a smidge. The song carries its message well, though, and the effects, pitch and background deliver the message just that much better.
7/10, well written.
Good, but...
The bass overpowers everything else. It kind of hurts my ears. However, I really like what you did to your voice. Having attempted to affect my own vocals, I know how difficult it is to sync voice with music.
It's a good concept, but perhaps you should spent more time on it. And, as stated before by someone else, maybe you should try to fix the peaking.
This sounds, I dun now, just asdf
It just sounds like something someone high would listen to.
Is it enough?
For 7 stars? Yes. It is enough for 7 stars. I dig it, but it's a 30 minute song and I can tell from listening.
This made me laugh repeatedly.
It's just hilarious. I love you.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Rianor 
Chicada 
LKGaming421 
