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Well I certainly got a MIDI keyboard!... Woah, it's 3 minutes long! I only just realised!

Yeah, I'm so used to not having one, so it's a bit wierd. I was also proud at the fact that I didn't have any clipping in the file; I usually do because I can't mix good :3

Anyhoo, I hope you like.

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EDIT: There's a better version of this song, called Breath (revisited). Please check that one out. It's way better, I reckon.


Beautiful Composition

This is awesome, I love it, but I DO have beef with one thing. The sound that starts at 1:06 next to the percussion. Nothing huge but it kinda hurt my ears compared with rest of it. Again really beautiful work.

AdventureBiscuit responds:

are you using headphones? because I didn't get that problem, but i didn't listen to it through headphones, so maybe that why that happened for you.

I'm glad you like it though! Thanks for the awesome score! :3

EDIT-Yeah, I know what you mean, actually. Sorry about that, I'll fix it sometime.


The drums didn't really hit on the right beats, Also they were only there for a few seconds at a time.
Pretty good, nice layering of tracks.
Gratz on your new keyboard.

AdventureBiscuit responds:

The right beats? Dunno what you mean, there.

And I don't think that the drums only being there for a little bit isn't a bad thing. If I put them in everywhere, the dynamics of the song wouldn't be as nice. But I can see what you mean, they aren't there for much of the time.

I'm glad you like the layering, because I'm not very good at that.

Thanks for reviewing, and thanks for the good score!

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Credits & Info

3.60 / 5.00

Oct 20, 2009
2:12 AM EDT
File Info
2.9 MB
3 min 12 sec

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