Sorry mate.

I am going to equate you to the Timbaland of Ng; and that's not a good thing. Like the famous producer in question, you really didn't bring anything new to the track... A new rhythm track, and a few minor fades aren't cutting it... Perhaps I am a bit biased, because I adore Akira's work on the Silent Hill 2 soundtrack, but I still stand by my observation. It seems, you should dissect the track more - and find ways to work in your own flair; instead of pasting a novel drum beat over it. Best of luck.

I don't dig it.

Is there any copyright issue here?
I mean, you used many samples from some Akira Yamaoka's song, am I right?
When I used to take just even a tiny sample from a song,
everybody on NG is jumping on me like I'm a fucking plagiarist.

Anyway, to the review now:

Yeah the drums are cool, they suits perfectly the song.
That's what drums are made for.

I heard a flaw at 1:08 and 1:22, the drums fade in is too brutal.
At 00:40 and 00:52, the wah wah effect are cool as well, I often use those effect during some of my songs.

At 2:00, I disagree with the synth's sound used, it has nothing to do with the ambiance of the song BUT I can dig that it's a "Hip Hop" wannabe song.
And to my ears, this synth's tune makes me thinks about Yeah from Usher.

So just adding some drums and wah wah effects to a song from another artist makes me uncomfortable.
Sorry pal, I hope you find my review pertinent.

Dreamy

This takes me away to a happy place in my mind. It's very relaxing and has a great beat. Wow man!

You, sir, deserve an award

This song is like a dream. I guess i've never heard something good as this.
We wand more ! :)

Good work, keep that up.

(1:58 *o*)

d(^-^)b

From the beginning I knew this would be a download.
Then When the drop came in about 1:40 I was like 0.0
keep em coming