I like what I'm hearing.
Your music is very simple, and pure feeling. The style that you chose for this piece suited this very much. The progression felt a bit slow in a few places (around 1:30). The switch at 0:56 is very smooth, I really enjoyed that. The ocean noises near the end and beginning are very soothing and fun. They add a depth to the music that shows some forward movement, in terms of your ability.
May I make a suggestion that you hunt around for some clearer bass beats? The samples that you use are a little... foggy, i guess is the word for it. They're muffled, and kinda unreal.
dude thanks finaly some one that actually knows about music yea know i am tryng to find a program that has good sounds but i cant find it
I'd love it more of it were at least 4 minutes :D
Great job though I think.
ohh yea i know i just couldnt think of any other melodys and stuff