It sorta needs a melody to it and please a snare in there sometimes too like every downbeat on a 1/2 note. for example, 1 2 3 4 would be like 1 snare 3 snare with the kick going all the way through. I think I've over-explained haha. Yeah It seems like generic repetitive trance that could get boring after awhile. Try to "bring it out" also by like adding some background sounds too and things yno. Even so, I can definitely see this in a club with the bass blasting at full tilt no doubt. Keep it up man!
Hey did you know that I make trance too? Do you mind checking some of that out?