good good

But u must add some more bass and awso the costum that word wasnt good

yea!

The whole song and every sound sucks real bad....

But man.,..

Those lyrics r da shit, u got some real talent. Just need to really work on your style and beats, i say make a piano beat with bells and redo it with bass lines, find better drums too.

But yea man, u sit fire, like a dragon!

Idk...

that beat.....<.<

wierd

but u killed it regardless

not one of the illest tracks ever but i fucks with it

Try rapping over [KOA] member Sirhc7000 beats

they suit ur vibe well

Pretty good,

The intro was ok. The voice was a tad quite, or the chimes were a tad loud. The lyrics were ok. They had a fairly good flow and vibe. I wasn't a big fan of this beat though. Kind of some sorta wierd ghostbusters type thing I thing. (I haven't watched ghostbusters, but it sounds like it can go with it). Hmm.

Overall, not bad, but not your best, but not as bad as Consequences.

~Jon~