First off you played it to slow, the intro was to long and the wrong speed, the base is, quite frankly, crap and youve just played the same few notes for most of the song.
you ave killed one of the greatest songs in existenst. please remove this junk.
The intro was a little too fast and, quite frankly, in almost a different key, definitely an octave higher for parts of it. It got a lot better in the verses, got looking forward to the solo, till I got there and realized there was none.
Another thing, was this a mono pan? It sounds to me like it was. If you want a good quality production, you need to pan certain instruments, i.e. drums, a lil to one side, and guitar with vocals to the other. It keeps it from muddling.
Sorry but it...
Sucks ! So poor as Hell or bengladesh !