It's one of the more original trance pieces I have heard on NG. That alone deserves my respect. There was something about the intro that put a big smile on my face. I love the buildup.
That aside, I will have to agree with a lot of the commentators here that the kick's a bit harsh. Also, the end does sound like it's winding down, but it also seems like it belongs in a midway pause in the piece -- after which you start cranking the music up again after that, but with more power and more complexity.
I loved listening to this. Thank you for sharing this! ^_^