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Oct 18, 2009 | 12:24 PM EDT
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6.9 MB
5 min 0 sec
4.11 / 5.00

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Rated 4.11 / 5 stars
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Author Comments

Written whilst on Holiday in Egypt. Lyrics were penned down in 2007 and just laid around untouched for years. Thought it could do with a bit of "Emotional Impact" so threw in the rock Section

Enjoy and Review =D



Rated 4 / 5 stars

A little more care

Good points:
- Good vocal melody
- Decent quality
- Good use of breaks (esp. before the solo)
- Impressive lead guitar

Bad points:
- Take abit more care with your recordings - the vocals are out of tune in some places and there's a couple of mistakes in the solo. These could easliy be rectified with a few more takes.
- The way the guitars end at the 3:28 mark doesn't sound imo - it sounds like you had to go off to answer the phone or you've just thought to yourself "fook it, my hand is knackered"
- For the love of all things replace the awful bass guitar! lol

Overall, it's a good song, I'd give the song/melody a 9/10 but the bad points bring the overall score down to a 7.5/10. Keep on rockin on, man.

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GnRfreek responds:

Thanks a ton for the Review, The Reason the Some bits weren't rectified was just because there was a lot more songs on the album which needed much more work than this and it got a bit overlooked, but melody wise it was one of the favourites.

And There's a real Bass guitar on the way, no no need for the computerized oddity

Thanks a bunch again