It was pretty good. I liked the melodies and bass wasnt half bad.
A few things you should fix up.
1. You need to master this song. The volumes are all over the place.
2. Some parts sound all distorted. (maybe due to the high volume levels?)
Your getting there. Keep up the good work!
fair points you have there. thanks for the comments
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.