Hey, this ain't so bad! Lookin forward to some lyrics with it. You should make it longer though, and maybe vary it up a little.
also, that drum roll at :23 was a little too fast, change that to 8ths instead of 16th.
Other than that, nice job. :D
dude thanx for the review my band kinda needed some demo's so i threw one of newer WIP demo's up but expect more songs like thisand lyrics are coming soon too oh well i'll take your suggestions into consideration
oh and the roll was in 32nd notes lol but i changed it now
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