Keep workin at it!
The lead was a little too harsh, and you couldn't hear the drums very well.
Maybe change the lead to a saw, and add a bass. :D
Yeah, It really was just a time waster that I made to show my step brother the program.
But the more I listen to it, I want to make it into a full song.
[So if you liked this, be on the look out for the finished product]
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.