the basics are there
You just need to download some better instruments for the bass and get some better soundfonts for the drums.
I love the intro. I think it needs more instruments, because you only have a squelchy bass and some drums, and when you want to drop something out to make the beat more interesting, you don't have too many places to turn. Also, drums by themselves tend to be quite boring, no matter how cool the rhythm (yes, you do have a nifty rhythm) At around 3:33, you brought in this bass which really should've been around earlier. It would've been cool if you toyed with that a little bit.
i havent really learned how to equalize stuff and am clueless about it :-/ hopefully ill learn with time ! TY for rating!