its sounds so cool, ive never heard a song so differently awesome like this!
Cool. The bass part in the beginning is a really satisfying repeating figure for a while. I especially like the way around 1:30 that it takes precedence over other things, but the constant eighth notes are satisfying too. When you change it a little at about 2:20 the change is unsettling and it only gets more sinister right up until the end. Right up until the end I found myself getting ready for something to happen. The unhappy chords, especially with the solo violin at the end, are also kind of suspenseful, so after all that when it just stopped on a B natural I felt a little cheated... like someone turned off the TV in the middle of a good program. So my take on this is it could be longer and the story could keep going. But I don't know what would come next; of course that would be up to you.
I like it
Either way i do like this, but I think that you should build and blend some orchestra, and war like drums....kinda like how they would put in a medieval sounding way =)
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