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I am supposed to be doing a college essay but I don't know what else to write so I made this (hence the name)... Listen all the way through and I would like some constructive criticism please :D

In the middle/end of the song I kind of remixed a Basshunter loop and another song I can't put my finger on... but I owe them quite a bit of credit for the ending. All of this was made in Garageband with no loops thank you very much :P

Happy Listening...


Fun little song - somewhat lacking in "fullness"

I really like what you threw together here - the melodies played nicely with each other, the drums were simple and didn't distract, and the parts changed at the right times to keep it from being boring. I also liked the second half - it almost sounds like a completely different song.

My one complaint though - and it's difficult to articulate - is that it sounds kinda hollow and tinny. You had all the elements - percussion, backing melody, leads, etc - but for some reason I felt like I was missing something - a fuller sound if you will.

Hope you keep the good work up - and don't stress too much about essays. 'Stuff's baby shit haha'

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very good, quite impressive :D

more please? :)

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Erosis responds:

Thank ya. I'm actually not procrastinating at the moment, but when I get the chance I will make some more!

I like it!

Yea im procrastinating too while writing and listening to this... I like the tune btw.!

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Erosis responds:

Haha! Glad to hear I'm not the only one! Right now I'm studying for Advanced Biology and I just can't seem to get much done... Hope you get your assignment done soon though :P

Reminds me of Megaman...

Nice job dude! Very cheerfull and with a great 16-bit atmosphere. This would fit perfectly in an action/platform game. Please make more, i'd love to listen!

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Erosis responds:

Thank ya very much! I tried something a bit different with this one compared to my other songs.

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4.36 / 5.00

Oct 15, 2009
10:26 PM EDT
File Info
6.2 MB
2 min 43 sec

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