the intro sounded great, very proffesional, but i think it would be great if there was some singing in this! it sounds perfect for singing. like kinda something like that song called Appolagize is what i got from the intro. :P when i heard "oh... that was so awesome!" it really hurt my ears and it made me sad that u ruined this song lol
Melody - 2/2 (i love it!)
Bassline - 1/2 (buh bah buh bah is not that great lol)
Beat/Variety - 1/2 (it was ok)
Mixing - 2/2 (you did pretty good on this one ^^)
Emotion/Feel/Sound - 1/2 (i liked it.)
BONUS POINTS - minus one for outro
Final Score - 6/10
Lol just don't yell at ur listeners at the end of a good song, and it would be perfect. XD
THATS IT IM TAKING SOUNDCLIP OFF IT WAS ORIGINALLY A JOKE FOR A FRIEND OF MINE BUT RUINS THE WHOLE THING
oh, and the mixing, I used a different software for this song, one I'm alot batter at mixing at.
I loved how you made the transition between piano and synths, as well as blending them to a nice beat. I'll give a 9 for that lil'joke at the end. Funny, but it ruined the climax =P
Keep on though.
LOL! Yeah, sorry 'bout that. I put that "lil'joke" there for a good pal of mine, but anyway, thanks for the review.