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I just dont like your flow. Maybe its cause you were freestyling it didn't seem like you were on track and knew what you were doing.
good beat though... really like it..
Author Comments
This is a little quick freestyle typo dealy i did.
Im not Mr. perfect, im Mr. subliminal/
a hypocritical criminal hittin' each syllable/
it doesn't take much to blow these fish outta the swimmin' hole/
just an individual writing rhymes that are oh so cynical/
yeah, but it doesn't stop there/
gotta short temper, ill explode on you like a solar flare/
better beware, cause if you don't you wont be prepared/
for the attacks im about to unleash here/
yup,yup here i go again/
rippin' up a-nother freestyle my friend/
yo, let me tell you even when im through with my songs/
my words will always live on/
even when im gone.../
Emdee-NF responds:
Thanks dude, and yeah like i just said i need to perfect my flow. and the beat is off of Jay-Z's Blueprint 3 album.
Damn..
i didnt even realize this was a freestyle till ya mentioned it. I live by these lines: "yo, let me tell you even when im through with my songs/
my words will always live on/
even when im gone.../" I think this sounds great, Im not going to complain about sound quality at all, because this is real.
-1 cause your flow came off in the 3rd bar (maybe too many syllables were thrown in there). I almost want to give ya a 10 cause this was a freestyle, but I cant.
Gravy track man, keep at it.
Emdee-NF responds:
Thanks man, im glad you liked it and could relate, and yeah, i have to work on my flow, its been a problem since day 1 haha.
Real potential
Your Mastering needs a bit of tweaking.
You sure have potential!
Emdee-NF responds:
thanks yo! yeah i didnt do anything just tried EQing not too good at it, i dont really have any of my songs mixed or mastered lol.
nice
hey that was pretty good, nice flow on the lyrics, delivery was great, voice wasnt the best, but with better recording you're there.
did you write that beat too? cause that was really something
Emdee-NF responds:
hey thanks man. and yeah i dont have the best mic, or voice probably, but better then lil waynes lol. and no that wasnt my beat, thats off of Jay-Z's Blueprint 3 album. produced by Kanye West.
Credits & Info
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- Downloads
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- Waiting for 1 more vote
- Uploaded
- Oct 15, 2009
- 3:00 PM EDT
- Genre
- Hip Hop - Modern
- File Info
- Song
- 2.7 MB
- 1 min 28 sec
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