Notbad
Well first off I want to say that this was notbad there is some nice little beats in this one and while it is short it has a bit of depth with it now just imagine having a longer loop of sorts with more build ups but thats just me I really like the style and sound that you have presented here with this little tune and hope to hear more of your fine work sometime soon.
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