Nice composition, poor production
You have some nice little themes and some good sound selection with the synths, but your levels are off.
The bass drums sits far back in the mix and has very little prominence. Conversely, your snare drum is excessively loud! Listen to your tracks on other systems and other speakers, then come back and rebalance...
Think the current rating does not reflect the potential of the track. Get your levels sounding a bit more even with less spikes (open up your exported file in something like Audacity - freeware audio editor to see this) then normalise.
Thanx for the first review,
I will surely check out Audacity... (nvm, it's sucky)