I thought this was really great! This song definently brings out this cool, calm sort of feeling.
I really liked how you used dialouge from "The Little Rascals" Ahh ~ Memories :3
I wanna use the "Dear Darla" dialogue, but I don't know how to get the background music out of the clip. :-\
I'm glad you enjoy it though. :-)
You don't need to change anything. Just add more to the song.