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Tearing up another Spawn beat, this is my next track The Verbal Map.

Just a little insight around my life, this track is my second recorded. Criticism is welcome, as I know I have a lot of room for improvement. My flow is something I really want some crit on, and how I can improve on it.


So ill This is danger !!!!!!!!!

War Spawn is the king of the underground R.A.P beat, now B you jus add another level to this beat. Now in saying that your flow could have be tighter your vocal projection was spot on in the first verse you owned it, the last verse was to crowded & rushed, before you record any verse you better have it down or it will sound like that jumble & rushed. This could have been a 10, I would have even put this on my mix tape. The second little thing is you vocal mix is needs work. Have this Master & fix the last verse you will have a 10 & then no one will be able say shit to you cause I see the beast in you, the hungry is there YOU CAN GO FAR but NEVER SETTLE for jus OK. Please do not rush your music make it the BEST it can BE, be real with yourself if not as good as could be then keep working on it till its ear perfect don't show your friends share this your Mc, Producer, & Beat maker peers we all know whats wack & whats a hit, This beat is a hit the song as it is jus so so, keep working at it. I wanna shout out Spawn for making this ill beat, you should link the beat in your comments.

Mad respect holla at me if you want a producer,

Omega Phantom

Legit as fuck

Listened to this a few times, this track is fucking REAL legit! That beat is fuckin tiiiiiigght , your a solid producer dude! You got some damn good flow man, i wish i could flow like that! Keep it up man, you know the realness!

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3.46 / 5.00

Oct 13, 2009
9:33 PM EDT
Hip Hop - Olskool
File Info
4 MB
4 min 24 sec

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