i think you did a good job keeping the theme
i like that you kept the original rhythm because to me the claps is what make or break this song but you got the perfect a 0:09 and 0:21. the pan/calliope flutes were an excellent addition and definitely give of the jungle theme. the instrument that plays a 0:06 could use a longer decay but there's really not much to complain about
It definetly misses something, plus the fact that it's only a base composition pasted one after another. Try to deviate a bit and to make a track out of it that can be listened to as a single song. But you're getting somewhere with this, undoubtedly!
Good so far, but...
It feels like it's missing a bit of something.
Maybe try adding some more bass to it.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.