Ah Another soul who got up and decided to use something outside his computer box. You even went as far as finding a vocalist. For that reason alone I give you a 10/10. Not because of the track its self cause that is not perfect just yet. But you know me... always room for improvement.
1. The level of the vocal is a tad loud maybe. This way its not a compliment to the music anymore but it overpowers it at times. Which is a pitty because in these genres the syntsh and beats should play just as big of a role if not bigger.
2. You gotta understand that my opinion about vocals is quite... negative. I love instrumental music:P so I'm very critical about these things. The parts where she does the long notes oooooooooooone. Are simply not in tune. Which is weird cause the rest of the songs sounds pretty dead on for such a young vocalist.
3. The use of sounds for the music. I regocnize most of the sounds being FL synths or presets that I heard somewhere before. Which I think is a pitty The composition is very classic though within this genre, you know what your making :)
4. Have you tried doubling vocals? simply let her record some parts of the vocal line again and on top of the existing ones. This can not only make your vocal more colorfull but it sometimes also masks little inaccuracies.
5. What did you use to record ? :p ( Audio junkie... guilty)
I have more but... I'll chat with you on MSN about that later :p
Awesome work. now don't go back but only forwards in the way your making music now alright?
That's a good listening.
I loved the song, quite original I think. The only thing I found a bit problematic is that maybe the vocalist was a bit loud.
I don't know. It just felt like I couldn't hear the song over the singing. Not that her singing was terrible at all. I loved the lyrics.
Other than that, it is worthy of downloading. I hope to hear your work progress, and excel.
Keep your creative juices flowing, and I'll do my part.
With every bit one by one I enjoyed it quite a bit cong. Still the opening was the more baddest
Nice composing, sounds really good. I love the combination of good instrumentals (melody, instrument use, etc...) and a great voice:)
This is great! really great! I'm glad to say, no, I'm proud to say i've seen you get to this level! This is everything a trance tune should be, it has a vocal hook, a nice bass line, good gated synths, it develops well, well produced, really great! Maybe just add a bit of kick by turning up the main gated synth hook, but really, it's a side note.
Love and peace man.
Many thanks dude. I will take into account your advice and see if I can make it better :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.