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hey this is my newest song hope you like it and please tell me what to improve on.
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thanks :)


catchy rhythm

well, i think the melody is pretty cool, my feet are following the rhythm :)

Keep at it.

Don't take offense at the 7/10. Read my comment for a bit more understanding.
I feel that there is something here, reaching to get out, and it may simply be your lack of experience, or lack of knowledge of the programs that you use, that is holding it back. It's has potential, and I kinda have a feeling that you can improve on it. You're creative!
The main beat (the one that leads the track (at 0:10) is sick! I love the mutation that takes place with it over the course of the song.
So, with that said, keep at it. Listen, learn, grow, and keep submitting. You'll get there.

btw, you're the only person that I've ever commented on asides from the great DJ-Nate. Spotted your comment on his music and wanted to take a look.


So I agree with aloneagainfriend, except for the not liking trance. You've got some cool melodies rockin here, but it sounds a little too simple like there's not enough going on (if that makes sense?). I'm not an expert at making music but I'm just saying what I hear.

Keep up the great work!

riptide11 responds:

what would you call it lol? what should i put in is it to slow? im kinda a noob at making this stuff so yea lol thanks for the feedback finally someone tells me something.


That's Kool.

riptide11 responds:

really dude thanks

I love trance

And I love this as well. XD. Great job

riptide11 responds:

dude you guys rock

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3.93 / 5.00

Oct 11, 2009
11:58 PM EDT
File Info
2.1 MB
1 min 52 sec

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