I mean that starting lead makes it sound like a cheap 8-bit gametune. Also, you'd need some pretty dark voice and lyrics (think about someone like Manson) to give it some industrial feel, because it's totally glorious now, no sign of that dying civilization anywhere. However, it's a nice beginning. I look forward to the full version!
Only if I had my guitar... ;;
This is really good
Even with this, you honestly need no lyrics its good as is, but thats just me. maybe release one with vocals, and one without just for me
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.