Congradulations on A-Bot 4th of the week!
the melodic structures of the beginning don't quite work...and clash quite a bit. i'm sure this was done on purpose to create tension, but it's a little much...
also, i hear alot of sampled sounds in there...i don't use FL (which is what i'm guessing you used), but i can tell there's alot of sampled sounds in there (especially that breathing/whispering sound towards the end)...
otherwise, really good stuff! keep it up! cheers an g'day.
Nice sounding song.. it sounds like you used FL, am I correct?? Really good sounds tho. Much props.
GREAT JOB! Perfect! Just perfect!