I like it!
This was really cool. It really did capture the sad feeling. This is really awesome! Keep up the good work man, I like it. Sometimes that white noise in the back comes up too much or two loudly, but I don't think you can control that specifically.
You said : Its dusty and dry. People are dying in the distance.
They sure are...this is the emotional part of songs
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.